I tried making my first variant, give me tips on how to improve.

[Onzikin]

Didn't turn out great in my opinion. Give me some advice on how to make him better.

 

[Onzikin]

Nevermind. It was the lack of eyebrows that was making it weird.

 

[Thomsen]

No wrinkles, no eyebrows, no expression at all
And what's with the falling eyes?

 

[Onzikin]

And what's with the falling eyes?

That's what's supposed to make the variant stand out. But I agree, I will add some more details to the face.

 

[Keyed zaryan]

I think the lines are too thick. Especially the beard.

 

[modderola]

ESBWABAG

 

[Onzikin]

No wrinkles, no eyebrows, no expression at all

I think the lines are too thick. Especially the beard.

 

[Soyspotter]

some changes, was too bothered to make it pixelly

 

[Keyed zaryan]

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That looks a lot better.

 

[Joseph]

zartynoob excellence

 

[worldatwar]

have my 2nd original variant

 

[Thomsen]

some changes, was too bothered to make it pixelly
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This looks much better, but i can see the obvious eraser lines near the chin and eyebrows and its just annoying to look at.

 

[Onzikin]

I think I'm going with this for finalized design

 

[worldatwar]

I think I'm going with this for finalized design
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too circular and smooth. give the 'jak some rough edges.

 

[Onzikin]

too circular and smooth. give the 'jak some rough edges.

How exactly?

 

[Onzikin]

Btw it's traced from this

 

[worldatwar]

How exactly?

i just get inspiration from the soyak variant.


that's how i thought when making fragrancejak. (lines are too thick imo)


i make the eye similar to soyak and other popular classic variants.

 

[Onzikin]

i just get inspiration from the soyak variant.
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that's how i thought when making fragrancejak. (lines are too thick imo)
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i make the eye similar to soyak and other popular classic variants.

You mean like this?

 

[𓅰𓅪𓃯]

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You mean like this?

This looks much nicer, I've no eye for IAS so take this with a mound of salt but I'd increase the size of the mouth a smidge.

 

[worldatwar]

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You mean like this?

the nose should be more rougher on its edges too imo