Drawings and snca diary

gay

 

[worldatwar]

>Nuh huh. It's you all 30 year old virgins who got her creeped out cause you keep sexualizing me and her when neither of us have showed any flirty behavior outside of your own twisted fantasies o however i eat mi delicia of sopa de macaco

 

[FloydTech]

No use of apostrophes, therefore instantly terrible. Jokes aside, here's some suggestions:
-on the sentence >Which is, dummyed replace the comma with an elipsis
-for cumsock, we need an explanation on how he knows what an anime girl is, but I assume it's on the rest of the script
-I also thing the dialogue could be less stiff, maybe something like >HMMMM, A real life anime girl! Time to knock my sock off! Something like that, and he asks if she wanna fuck afterwards instead of before
-Missing commas on 'Hey pretty lady' and '[...]to be, which is... dummyed.'
Otherwise it's kinda difficult to critique without knowing the rest of the plot and pacing, I assume we are the point of the story where the other kids show their experiments. This is the perfect opportunity for gags and to showcase the abilities and character of the cumsock and what makes it special. Maybe he ends up destroying all the other experiment critters and ends up getting the other kids angry. Creating conflict and showcasing his antagonist role.

i guess what i was going for with the cumsock knowing what the anime girl is is the fact that the 2 dudes that made the cumsock are the weaboos of the class

*mom

my mom just watches korean dramas

 

[_account]

Reminder, this is a truecel only website, all fakecels, simps or normgroids GTFO

 

[Onzikin]

She's not letting you hit

OH HELLL NAH! This Diddy AHHH blud really is a grown man wanting to talk about two 17 year olds having sex Someone check this noob's hard drive asap

 

[_73]

OH HELLL NAH! This Diddy AHHH blud really is a grown man wanting to talk about two 17 year olds having sex Someone check this noob's hard drive asap

Im also 17 you simp

 

[Onzikin]

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Not related but FloydTech you're a gem

Is anyone also gonna accuse this noob of simping too?

 

[Foggurt]

OH HELLL NAH! This Diddy AHHH blud really is a grown man wanting to talk about two 17 year olds having sex Someone check this noob's hard drive asap

Most bad faith, disingenuous way to insult someone that only soybooru anons could rival its shear obsessiveness award

 

[_73]

Is anyone also gonna accuse this noob of simping too?

No, because he gave one compliment, you've been glazing ribbon this entire thread, also lets not forget this brazillian gem

 

[Onzikin]

Most bad faith, disingenuous way to insult someone that only soybooru anons could rival its shear obsessiveness award

Yeah. I was imitating booru speak with that one.

 

[FloydTech]

s-stop fighting on my blog...you soycuck!!

 

[Soyspotter]

>the last two pages of this thread

 

[Foggurt]

Yeah. I was imitating booru speak with that one.

>Being dummyed on purpose

 

[Onzikin]

No, because he gave one compliment, you've been glazing ribbon this entire thread, also lets not forget this brazillian gem
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I was larping as a jock character who acts condescending towards girls. Ain't nobody gonna seriously be thinking that's effective rizz

s-stop fighting on my blog...you soycuck!!
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You all heard her.

 

[Foggurt]

>the last two pages of this thread

Gemmy song

 

[korg]

No, because he gave one compliment, you've been glazing ribbon this entire thread, also lets not forget this brazillian gem
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why was this guy banned from here again?

 

[_73]

why was this guy banned from here again?

For being the alt of @Onzikn

 

[Foggurt]

s-stop fighting on my blog...you soycuck!!
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Having several pages of your own blog get derailed into shitflinging is aryan doe

 

[korg]

For being the alt of @Onzikn

so they're the same person right?

 

[worldatwar]

>OH HELLL NAH! This Diddy AHHH blud really is a grown man wanting to talk about mi delicia of two 17 year olds having sex Someone check this noob's sopa de macaco asap ou algo assim

 

[FloydTech]

No, because he gave one compliment, you've been glazing ribbon this entire thread, also lets not forget this brazillian gem
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i forgot he was sneedman, i always see people as their profile picture for some reason so the change from being a buff chudjak to being moe anime girl is kinda funny