And mine?It's more like 2 defining traits, i would best describe you as the brapzillian simp, Warrior-Z as the muslim debator and Ecstasy as the aztec, oneshit fan
No use of apostrophes, therefore instantly terrible. Jokes aside, here's some suggestions:
Didn't read, stop embarrassing yourself.No use of apostrophes, therefore instantly terrible. Jokes aside, here's some suggestions:
-on the sentence >Which is, dummyed replace the comma with an elipsis
-for cumsock, we need an explanation on how he knows what an anime girl is, but I assume it's on the rest of the script
-I also thing the dialogue could be less stiff, maybe something like >HMMMM, A real life anime girl! Time to knock my sock off! Something like that, and he asks if she wanna fuck afterwards instead of before
-Missing commas on 'Hey pretty lady' and '[...]to be, which is... dummyed.'
Otherwise it's kinda difficult to critique without knowing the rest of the plot and pacing, I assume we are the point of the story where the other kids show their experiments. This is the perfect opportunity for gags and to showcase the abilities and character of the cumsock and what makes it special. Maybe he ends up destroying all the other experiment critters and ends up getting the other kids angry. Creating conflict and showcasing his antagonist role.
What did I do wrong? I was just giving feedback on her script?Didn't read, stop embarrassing yourself.
*momMy dad is playing deltarune
She's not letting you hitWhat did I do wrong? I was just giving feedback on her script?
Idk yet but you seem pretty keyed and aryanAnd mine?
BRAPZILIANS GOT NO RIZZXlud really deleted everything because the favela gambling addict made xher uncomfortable
Kys Jerry Blevins Jr.Obsessed clittycel. Mad cause the average 20 year old Turkish woman looks like this
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Wrong + the average brapzillian woman probably looks worseObsessed clittycel. Mad cause the average 20 year old Turkish woman looks like this
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Nuh huh. It's you all 30 year old virgins who got her creeped out cause you keep sexualizing me and her when neither of us have showed any flirty behavior outside of your own twisted fantasiesXlud really deleted everything because the favela gambling addict made xher uncomfortable
>Obsessed clittycel. Mad cause the average 20 year old Turkish woman looks like this ou algo assim
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She's not letting you hitNuh huh. It's you all 30 year old virgins who got her creeped out cause you keep sexualizing me and her when neither of us have showed any flirty behavior outside of your own twisted fantasies
God-tier projection coming from the Brapzilian simp dummy.Nuh huh. It's you all 30 year old virgins who got her creeped out cause you keep sexualizing me and her when neither of us have showed any flirty behavior outside of your own twisted fantasies
@JoshuaRyneGoldberg REFERENCE??? NUSHLOG MENTIONED TURN ON THE NUSHLOG ANTHEM STEPHEN!!!Nuh huh. It's you all 30 year old virgins
>No use of apostrophes, therefore instantly terrible. Jokes aside, here's some suggestions:
-on the sentence >Which is, dummyed replace the comma with an elipsis
-for cumsock, we need an explanation on how he knows what an anime girl is, but I assume it's on the rest of the script
-I also thing the dialogue could be less stiff, maybe something like >HMMMM, A real life anime girl! Time to knock my sock off! Something like that, and he asks if she wanna fuck afterwards instead of before
-Missing commas on 'Hey pretty lady' and '[...]to be, which is... dummyed.'
Otherwise it's kinda difficult to critique without knowing the rest of the plot and pacing, I assume we are the point of the story where the other kids show their experiments. This is the perfect opportunity for gags and to showcase the abilities and character of the cumsock and what makes it special. Maybe he ends up destroying all the other experiment critters and ends up getting the other kids angry. Creating conflict and showcasing his antagonist role.
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>No use of apostrophes, therefore instantly terrible. Jokes aside, here's some suggestions:
-on the sentence >Which is, dummyed replace the comma with an elipsis
-for cumsock, we need an explanation on how he knows what an anime girl is, but I assume it's on the rest of the script
-I also thing the dialogue could be less stiff, maybe something like >HMMMM, A real life anime girl! Time to knock my sock off! Something like that, and he asks if she wanna fuck afterwards instead of before
-Missing commas on 'Hey pretty lady' and '[...]to be, which is... dummyed.'
Otherwise it's kinda difficult to critique without knowing the rest of the plot and pacing, I assume we are the point of the story where the other kids show their experiments. This is the perfect opportunity for gags and to showcase the abilities and character of the cumsock and what makes it special. Maybe he ends up destroying all the other experiment critters and ends up getting the other kids angry. Creating conflict and showcasing his antagonist role.
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